You don't really want pick-up lines in general. In my experience dudes who use them strike out a lot.
That one's actually a solid strategy for getting laid, if you ask more politely. Just go to a couple bars, make a little small talk and hit on 30 reasonably attractive women in one night with that line. Odds are one of them will say yes. The only important bit is to make sure you don't really alienate a girl, because when you alienate one girl, you've usually alienated most of the other girls who saw you do that too. But soliciting casual sex at bars is usually acceptable.Really? I just tell her that I'm going to put +1 SWORD in her vagina. Works every time, give it a shot.
treave said:I think this version flows a bit better?
We have much to talk about and solve between us, but first I want us to complete this together. We're better fighting together than alone. Remember that night against Changfeng? And the fight with the toad demon? Whatever we do, we always end up together. Now, let's finish this gauntlet as we started it. A pair.
Do you trust me? Remember, I did jump off my horse for you. Qilin and Cao'er might refer to you as "third", but you were the one I first proposed to, even if I did not know it at the time. Long ago, I promised you the moon and the stars for your love. I'm still coming up short, but here's a spark to start.
Get up Holy Maiden, this race isn't over yet.
Either I kiss you, or we find a toad demon. And THEN I kiss you. Because I'm not going to leave you. Not again. Though, in truth, I never did. You've always been with me. In my mind...and in my heart."
*whips out the wolfs fang amulet*
“Now if you still want to kill me I understand. My life's in your hands... But I think the Abbot would be terribly disappointed... if I kiss the Abbot right now, will he explode? I'd love to find out, but I need your help, because I'm not sure if he's willing. I need you, I need you to help us do this together. I’ve always needed you all these years. I'd have no one else here but you, Yunzi, now let's go kick some ass!"
treave, C is where you take this disjointed thing and make it more palatable, right?
How about something like this, same content just a slightly different order:
We have much to talk about and solve between us, but first I want us to complete this together. We're better fighting together than alone. Remember that night against Changfeng? And the fight with the toad demon? Whatever we do, we always end up together. Now, let's finish this gauntlet as we started it. A pair.
Do you trust me? Remember, I did jump off my horse for you. Qilin and Cao'er might refer to you as "third", but you were the one I first proposed to, even if I did not know it at the time. Long ago, I promised you the moon and the stars for your love. I'm still coming up short, but here's a spark to start.
Get up Holy Maiden, this race isn't over yet.
Either I kiss you, or we find a toad demon. And THEN I kiss you. Because I'm not going to leave you. Not again. Though, in truth, I never did. You've always been with me. In my mind...and in my heart."
*whips out the wolfs fang amulet*
“Now if you still want to kill me I understand. My life's in your hands... But I think the Abbot would be terribly disappointed... if I kiss the Abbot right now, will he explode? I'd love to find out, but I need your help, because I'm not sure if he's willing. I need you, I need you to help us do this together. I’ve always needed you all these years. I'd have no one else here but you, Yunzi, now let's go kick some ass!"
CCCCCCCCCCCCBut none of the lines here are likely to appear in C
I will deter to Lambchop's judgement, as I always do in times of crisis.D>C - Geez, do you boneheads actually think she'll stand there and listen to all that??? He'll get two sentences in before she knees him to the groin and storms off. treave is epic trolling you bros.
she'll stand there and listen to all that
Lambchop, she just might if she goes in shock after the first two sentences.Geez, do you boneheads actually think she'll stand there and listen to all that???
Nope.she'll stand there and listen to all that
Of course she will. Wouldn't you?
And what would you do after you heard it? Come on, bro. Don't you know it's wrong to troll the ?certainly would.
To me it's more satisfying when feelings are communicated simply.
Is this what A will look like? Because I like this much more than the original Turbodweeb Confession.How about something like this, same content just a slightly different order:
We have much to talk about and solve between us, but first I want us to complete this together. We're better fighting together than alone. Remember that night against Changfeng? And the fight with the toad demon? Whatever we do, we always end up together. Now, let's finish this gauntlet as we started it. A pair.
Do you trust me? Remember, I did jump off my horse for you. Qilin and Cao'er might refer to you as "third", but you were the one I first proposed to, even if I did not know it at the time. Long ago, I promised you the moon and the stars for your love. I'm still coming up short, but here's a spark to start.
Get up Holy Maiden, this race isn't over yet.
Either I kiss you, or we find a toad demon. And THEN I kiss you. Because I'm not going to leave you. Not again. Though, in truth, I never did. You've always been with me. In my mind...and in my heart."
*whips out the wolfs fang amulet*
“Now if you still want to kill me I understand. My life's in your hands... But I think the Abbot would be terribly disappointed... if I kiss the Abbot right now, will he explode? I'd love to find out, but I need your help, because I'm not sure if he's willing. I need you, I need you to help us do this together. I’ve always needed you all these years. I'd have no one else here but you, Yunzi, now let's go kick some ass!"
Yes, this sounds good.