TempleOfArcanumBloodlines
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- Jan 24, 2020
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i don't mind the rp style dialogue but the past tense feels weird
why wouldn't it be like "I don't trust this man, I draw my weapon" or "Ask where he appeared from"
the way it is makes it sound like you're recounting a story after the fact
why wouldn't it be like "I don't trust this man, I draw my weapon" or "Ask where he appeared from"
the way it is makes it sound like you're recounting a story after the fact