gurugeorge
Arcane
The writing in Dragonfall is terrible for three reasons:
- Its overreliance on "tell" over "show". For example, everyone tells you how great Monika was, but it is never shown. You just have to take it for granted.
- Its hamfisted anti-racism.
- Its terrible use of German.
The funny thing about its ideological activism is how poorly though through it is. It's not even at the level of propaganda, it's just pure self-indulgent libtardism. Isn't the purpose of anti-racist propaganda to deconstruct racist notions? Let's consider the following:
Then we have the Christian fascists (not an analogy, these words are literally used) like the goth girl's father that like to burn witches and are also super racist, because... well, they're just bad like that. Religion makes you stupid and hateful. What are Christians like in the game, anyway? Who knows, we never meet them. How did fascism appear in a world with mythical races and dragons? Did fantasy Berlin go through a fantasy Weimar too? Again, who knows.
- Orcs and Trolls are clearly identified with non-white minorities, particularly blacks, more than in any traditional fantasy setting. More than in Arcanum(which maintains some vagueness, rather unsuccessfully). Here they're depicted as urban lumpenproles who engage in petty crime. They do Malcolm X style "organizing". Other races see them as brutes with low intelligence. They're antagonized by pseudo neo-nazis. This is not Tolkien-level "analogy" here.
- The good characters claim that prejudice against them is unfair and incorrect, yet the RPG system gives them straight penalties to Intelligence and Charisma(physical beauty). Elves, on the other hand, have higher charisma, as well as being depicted as beautiful, charming and seductive. What are we supposed to think? Do libtards even think? How is having a race of ugly, stupid people, which you arbitrarily identify with Africans supposed to deconstruct racism? It's hilarious to see people who praise the game's writing go along with this.
We have all these real-world notions and concepts warped into the game at random, without any context. We're just supposed to carry all our assumptions into this new world and never question them. Isn't this the opposite of good writing? Seen from this perspective, the writing truly is terrible. I was charitably omitting this aspect when I called it competent (which it is, most of the time).
It's the kind of stuff you'd randomly assemble as a Left-leaning, anarchist-inclined freshman student nattering to other freshmen.