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Completed Nails -Beginning of Your "Heart Beat"- (NSFW)
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shywn
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I hurriedly looked around, and found her.
But, the peril was still not over for her.
On the edge of the scaffold, ready to fall any moment now, not moving a muscle.
An uneasy feeling hit me.
However, the repeated shocks to the scaffold had laid much debris, blocking the way between me and Tim Timaya.
I can't dawdle here for much longer...
*crrrrack*
That moment...
Suddenly, I could hear Shamirnarsa's voice from behind.
- Dash right.
- Dash left.
...I honestly don't understand why they put a choice here. One of them leads to a failure, in case you want to know. I accidentally selected it once.
I started running left.
I ran, just as Shamirnarsa had told me to.
She seemed to have been correct, as I did not run into many obstacles, and successfully reached Tim Timaya.
I gently caught her body, barely held up by the edge of the scaffold.
Pulse... Yes. No external injuries either...
It seems like she had just fallen unconscious...
I could feel her soft warmth through my gloves.
The sensation in my hands was the same as five years ago...
Her eyes opened slowly...
There was a tinge of sadness in her expression...
I knew that it was not the right time for this, but the words just came out of my mouth.
Spoken like a small child, as if this was the most important thing in the world to know...
Tim Timaya looked straight at me.
Tears slowly welled up in her eyes.
I started running over to Minvi, who was about to be engulfed by the flames.
shywn
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I frantically shouted her name, and extended my arm, but she continued to gaze vacantly at mid-air.
*thud*
The scaffold swayed once more, and I lost my balance.
I could see the fire growing stronger before my eyes.
When I gained my footing once more...
The flames slowly enveloped her...
The flames had completely shut me off from Minvi.
I could not hear any screams.
Just her figure disappearing behind the slowly dancing flames...
The words escaped my lips as I for a moment could not accept what had happened right in front of my eyes.
I still tried to step forth, to push through the flames.
Kalderina said to me, with tears in her eyes.
Kalderina, who clung to her like to a big sister...
She's probably having it more difficult than I am...
I forced myself to look elsewhere.
*rrrooooaarr*
Around us were no signs of life. Who would indeed approach the collapsing scaffold in a situation like this?
*rustle*
On the open ground, both the soldiers and the believers no longer cared about each other, and were running about and trying to escape.
Once we reached the midpoint, everything suddenly became bright.
I automatically looked up at the light source.
Tim Timaya lowered her eyes a bit...
I laid down then and there...
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Dayyālu
Arcane
...Jamrock...
...Minardi, eh...
...Sorry... Please let me be now...
.....................
...I must... sleep a bit...
...Yeah.
I laid down then and there...
Talk about awkward.
Can't wait for the riveting conversations with the trio.
shywn
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Yeah, that Minardi mini-conversation there is really jarring. I wonder if it's a programming error or something.
I double-checked and it was not an error with my merge of my previous translations and the new script. Indeed, the only new lines in the previous post can be found if you just scan for the Tim Timaya icons.
Speaking of which... I found it interesting how the first post ('Save Tim Timaya') had so much of the same yet was still quite different.
Also, abnaxus's karaoke should read ディス and not ヂス
I double-checked and it was not an error with my merge of my previous translations and the new script. Indeed, the only new lines in the previous post can be found if you just scan for the Tim Timaya icons.
Speaking of which... I found it interesting how the first post ('Save Tim Timaya') had so much of the same yet was still quite different.
Also, abnaxus's karaoke should read ディス and not ヂス
shywn
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...After that, the whole of this incident became well-known, thanks to Tim Timaya.
Owing to her, suspicions of me as Minvi's kidnapper were withdrawn, and even with the events that transpired, the gulf between humans and claw people did not widen... ~~~
In other words, the incident had no effect whatsoever...
Apart from Minvi's death...
And then, time went on...
Just like five years ago, this incident too came to be etched deeply inside me, but its pain too started to dullen...
Suddenly, I became aware that everybody around me was silently watching over my taciturn self... ~~~
...I really can't continue like this...
Isn't this the same as before...?
The same as before, being controlled by my own grief...
What should I do now?
Not in the grief-controlled present, but in the future...
I...
When I pondered over it...
I suddenly remembered Tim Timaya...
Five years ago...
When I thought I had lost everything, the one thing that was still left...
Should I go meet her... once again?
- Meet Tim Timaya.
- The past is the past.
Nope. Not you.
That's right... The past... is the past...
................
My former war buddy... But now, it was different... I would like to cherish her feelings, as a woman...
- Stand by her side.
- But I cannot respond to her feelings.
One Minardi ending, coming up!
I headed for Altia Castle to meet Minardi...
Er, I thought it was Altamina Castle...
Half a year later...
An older knight I knew from my previous service with the chivalry spoke to me, half in jest.
Though I was fine being a mere rank-and-file soldier originally, everyone in the chivalry who knew me (Minardi included) recommended me as the captain of the chivalry to the king.
Their line of reasoning apparently was, "if you make him a low-ranking knight, he'll just run off sooner or later"... ~~~~
Sheesh...
Once she said that, Minardi started hurriedly preparing dinner.
Minardi standing there in the kitchen had a gentle feel to her, nothing like how she appeared at the battlefield.
As I replied, the regular chopping of a knife started to echo in the room...
In the end... the affair brought nothing forth...
Both the discrimination and conflict continue to exist in Altia...
However...
As long as each of us remember the events that lead us here... ~~
Surely... One day...
JAMROCK
Final mental score: 28
Final mental level: 2
Final thought score: 61
Final thought level: 3
...The rest I'll skip. They're the same.
shywn
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Er, I'm not sure you noticed, but I hit a Fin there in the previous post. So any lack of updates is because of that. Just so that you know.
My theory is that you need at least level 3 of mental score to save Tim Timaya, and level 3 of thought score to save Minvi. Possibly more than that to be able to save both. Maybe I'll get to test that in my private game which I recently resumed after not having played it since April.
My private game has rubbish relationship levels. Day 10 and all I have unlocked is Kalderina and Minardi. Everyone else is green. I guess giving accurate performance reviews is one of the keys to this game... Strange, really.
My theory is that you need at least level 3 of mental score to save Tim Timaya, and level 3 of thought score to save Minvi. Possibly more than that to be able to save both. Maybe I'll get to test that in my private game which I recently resumed after not having played it since April.
My private game has rubbish relationship levels. Day 10 and all I have unlocked is Kalderina and Minardi. Everyone else is green. I guess giving accurate performance reviews is one of the keys to this game... Strange, really.
Dayyālu
Arcane
Yep, and the "Stab" ending was.... agreeable. Better than the "everyone burned alive and Jamrock died alone and sad" ending, for sure
. I'm not particularly sad about Minvi roasting, she was somewhat annoying during the prologue.Obscure character mechanics are a tradition for this kind of games, I guess. Kichikuou Rance was insanely messy with relationship requirements at times.
shywn
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Now that probably a number of people have read this far...
Any opinions on this game? Well, of the parts you've seen here.
The interface was indeed quite irritating, but that was not something you had to suffer. How was the plot? Graphics? That sort of thing.
I recall someone on the first page saying it was a bit stupid. Have your opinions changed?
Any opinions on this game? Well, of the parts you've seen here.
The interface was indeed quite irritating, but that was not something you had to suffer. How was the plot? Graphics? That sort of thing.
I recall someone on the first page saying it was a bit stupid. Have your opinions changed?
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