I resampled my voice, it is much louder now. Unfortunately this brought out some artifacts, which are the result of my shitty microphone, but overall this sounds much better IMO.
Dude this is horrible. I mean it in the encouraging way, I'm sure you can do better and you seem to actually have something to say but not for 4 minutes.
My opinion/advice/idiocy:
- nobody cares about your english so don't worry about it, one of my favorite youtubers is ruspiglets (for some reason his videos are gone) who speaks in a totally broken russian accent but has a personality and balls to make up for it
- while you don't need to be edgy, you sound exactly like a 16 year old boy giving a high school presentation and their pathetic way of speaking and presenting makes me hate them
- you didn't say anything interesting or in depth or funny in the whole video so I'm not sure what the purpose of it was, you need a strong thesis and support it/make it funny/relevant
- I'm probably in the minority here but I still enjoy spoony, razorfist and these guys because they are both well informed and funny and articulate, not only one of these but both
what's the purpose of this video? you sound like you're reading shit off a paper. the only funny thing is how you sometimes sound like a disappointed old grandpa "I dont like this preorder thing, you know? you make me sad"
so give it some spark and actual content, meng!
and imo unless youre one of those lucky few like spoony who is a total nerd and has huge base of interests, you cant produce regular content and you must make a few and far between but good and indepth videos about something you care about