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Completed Katawa Shoujo: I love you just the way you are...

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I'm sorry I couldn't get the part two drama tape ready. I tried asking for volunteers in the Codexian Diversity Squad but had no luck. I tried LARPing it myself with a mic, but the constant bathroom trips were too demanding and created lots of cuts. :( Perhaps I'll release it someday as part of the Katawa Shoujo: Enhanced Edition this Christmas.
 

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ED: Thanks for sticking till the end, spekkio. Now let's deal with the aftermath.

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I love you, Lilly.

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A long clean up and a day later...

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Turning my head to the left, I find the rain outside sweeps against the windows loudly. Spray after the wind-blown spray lashes against the glass, as if trying its hardest to make up for the summer's previous heat.
I sit up in the futon, holding the back of my neck to try and subdue the pain from my awkward sleeping position.
By all accounts I should be lamenting the turn in the weather, given that this is our last day here. The events of yesterday refuse to stop flooding my mind, though.

The feeling of holding Lilly's crying body in my arms. The rush of lust and hormones that flowed through us as we spent the night together. It seems almost futile to try and rationalize everything that happened.
In an attempt to distract myself, I groan and lean over to retrieve my bag without standing. Pulling out one bottle after another, I take the daily regimen's worth of pills from their containers and swallow them without further ado.

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ED: Oh get over it, already. So you plowed a blind woman. Big fucking deal.

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ED: Speaking of two girls...

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Ah, go- ack!

I reply to her completely forgetting that I'm in the middle of swallowing a particularly large pill. Coughing and spluttering, I violently gag on it.

ED: Oh for fuck's sake.

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Ah, Hisao!

After sputtering loudly and tapping my chest a couple of times to force it down, I manage to recover.

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I'm fine. Sorry, forgot I was swallowing.
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Sorry, I didn't mean to-

I hold my hand up, gesturing for Hanako to stop.

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I gagged. It's my fault. 'Morning, Hanako.

She pauses a moment before bowing in reply.

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Hi, Lilly.
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Good morning... Hisao.

For a while, a silence hangs in the air as neither of us knows what to do.

ED: Ugh. What are you? Newly-weds?! You're confusing Lil' Bacon!

Given what happened last night, we both have more than enough reason to be finding the situation awkward; just how are we meant to react to meeting each other after something like... that?

ED: I don't know, Hisao. If I had fucked a girl, I'd post in the Codex's General Discussion.

The best course of action would probably be to talk to Lilly alone, to set things in order.

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Um, I'll ... start making breakfast.

ED: MMMMMM Sausage and Scrambled Eggs. MMMMMMMMMMMM! Delish!

Lilly evidently catches on to my train of thought.

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I'll help. Hanako, could you set the table?

She nods, her head disappearing into a cupboard as she quickly goes about her assigned task.

I rub a little more sleep out of my eyes as I wander over to the fridge and take out some milk, and Lilly grabs various brightly colored boxes from some of the lower cupboards to my side.
While we make the rather bland-looking meal, I whisper somewhat more quietly than usual. Knowing Lilly's hearing, she won't have any trouble catching what I say.

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She gives a delicate nod, her expression weak.
Her tiredness surely plays a part, she seems genuinely unsure about what's happened between us, and how to move ahead. I can't say I blame her, considering my feelings are the same.

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I'm sorry, Hisao. I wasn't thinking straight yesterday. I never stopped to consider you or Hanako, and I even went as far as ...

ED: Well you just - ...I ...I got nothing.

She's winding herself up. With her hands and voice both tightening, I give her a gentle bump to try and lighten up the situation.

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You don't have to apologize. I said I liked you as well, after all.
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But I...

As her composure begins to falter, it becomes obvious there's no alternative.

ED: Moar?

Turning to Lilly, I gently embrace her tall frame. She offers no resistance at all, thankfully pulling back, just, from the edge of her emotions.

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ED: ... Don't mind her. Do it all the way. What's stopping you two? Maybe she can join in as well.

Later, by the dining table...

The clatter of utensils against the plates is the only sounds to be heard as we silently eat. Whereas before only two of us may have been unsure of ourselves, the entire situation has changed.

After weeks of blissful friendship, whiling away the days with shared meals and chatter with little meaning, the relationship of Lilly and I, no, that of all of us, has irreversibly changed.

I can't take this.

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Lilly...

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ED: Hanako, I plowed your best friend last night.

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This might seem abrupt but... I've confessed to Hisao.

For a moment, Hanako looks almost confused; precisely the reaction I thought she would have.

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No shit. Did you fuck him?

ED: Gawd, I wish it was like that. Would've been awesome.

She eventually nods, her spoon still in her mouth as she does.

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Did you accept?
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I did.

ED: And banged her, too.

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Fuck you.

ED: I wish.

She gives a smile so large, and so earnest, I find myself blushing. I think it's the brightest I've ever seen her expression look.

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Then I'm happy. I'm really, really happy.
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I'm sorry for not telling you anything about it before. Things have been...

Hanako shakes her head from side to side emphatically, apparently forgetting in her rush that Lilly couldn't possibly notice.
She begins fiddling with her fingers, looking a little more nervous than she did before.

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To be honest, I began to think you might like each other a while ago. At first I didn't really know what to think about it... but I...

ED: ... ... ... please don't say you actually liked Hisao.

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I decided in the end that... if my friends are happy, then I'm happy.
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I was really glad to have another friend when we met Hisao, so you finding love through him is even better... right?

ED: Eh. Whatever. See you in another play-through.

A feeling of relief at her acceptance of our relationship falls over me like a wave. The same happens to Lilly, judging by her expression.

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Thank you, Hanako. I really appreciate you being so understanding.
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I have no fucking choice, bitch.

ED: Is what I would've said.

Lilly's voice still sounds slightly apologetic, or at least unsure. This doesn't escape Hanako, who appears lost in thought for a few moments before turning to me.

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Hisao, do you mind if me and Lilly go outside for a bit?

ED: O_o Don't do anything rash, now...

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Ah, no, feel free...
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Hanako?

Hanako gets up from her seat, taking Lilly's hand and almost dragging her from the table in her excitement. Considering Lilly's typically slow and steady pace, Hanako's haste makes her footing awkward and she almost loses her balance a couple of times.
It's a pretty amusing sight, leaving me wordless as I watch them disappear out the door. It's only now that I realize the rain's stopped, being replaced by a sky seemingly all the more vivid and bright to make up for the morning's drab gray expanse.
For Hanako, this must be a pretty big revelation. Lilly and I are really the only people she associates with, almost as if we were parents in her own's stead.

ED: ... Yes, that's ... what?

I suppose that might well be the best way to describe the relationship we share. A father, mother and daughter, all playing around in our little make-believe family as if it could last forever.

ED: Hisao. You're...you're crazy. *Sobs*

It might be a strange dynamic, and one that certainly can't last for long... but maybe, just for this one small moment, it's okay. As I stand from the table and go to join them in the fields outside, I nod to myself in affirmation.

ED: *Cries* Yeah, you're crazy.

This one small moment of happiness, no matter how brief, will last with me, with all of us, forever.

Hours pass...

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I have no idea how long it's been since I had a genuine hot bath, but right now I can hardly be bothered trying to remember.

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What the hell am I doing?

ED: ... Deep.

...

... I guess I shouldn't think like that. What's done is done, and maybe this could be viewed as just another aspect of my new life that I'm working on.

I enjoy being with Lilly, and there's more to life than school and a career after all.

*Knock knock*

As I busily attempt to rationalize all that's happened, I hear a series of raps on the door. I pick myself up and sit upright, trying to figure out the source.
Three, no more and no less. Light yet assertive in their tapping, and timed regularly enough to tune a metronome. I'd be extremely surprised if it wasn't Lilly.

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May I... come in?

ED: M...moar?

Yeah, it's Lilly.

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I'm still in the bath, I'll be out in a sec.
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...I know.

The voice coming from the other side of the door freezes me. After a second's thought, I rest on the side of the bath and let my arms dangle over the side.
Despite trying my best to play it off, I can't help letting my mind wander.

ED: Guess...we get to watch her...uh....pee?

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S- sure, come in.
 

Brother None

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*sighs*

I always try to read RK47 LPs but this one is becoming unbearable.

The rewritten lil' bacon lines made me guffaw tho. Do more of those.
 

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What in the flying fuck am I reading

There are people who say this has good writing? Really? Fallout 3's writing goty award looks well-deserved in the context of this thing.
 

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Yep... to quote an emperor...ah fuck it.
I'm sorry. Let's just..put an end to this. I mean, fuck, it's almost a month since I started it. Let's go all the way.

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Ah... h-hey... Lilly.
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Do you mind if I take a bath with you?

ED: ... you're dead to me, Lilly. Do whatever you wish to this ... THIS man.

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I don't mind. Go ahead.

With a small nod she begins to lift her sweater off her shoulder, baring her chest little by little.

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I could do that for you, if you'd like.
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Refused.
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Why?
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...

Her face shows she's still not overly comfortable with letting me attend to her. I can't say I blame her.
She continues undressing, her shirt and skirt falling to the floor and leaving her in her white lace bra and panties. Eventually, she stands bare in the center of the room.

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Hisao?
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Hmm?
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You're thinking perverted thoughts, aren't you?

Meanwhile, outside the bathroom...

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S-sir, are you alright?
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Hey...Lil' Bacon.
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Ex..excuse me?
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*Smiles* You noticed me. It's ... amazing. I thought only aspie could.
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A-aspie? Wh-who are you?
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Oh...I'm just...Hisao's friend.
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Oh? I-I didn't know.
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They're fucking inside. In the tub.
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W-what?
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Don't play dumb.
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B-but..they're...
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IN LOVE? FUCK THAT SHIT!
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P-please don't shout.
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I'm dead inside, Bacon. DEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD.
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I-I never caught your n-name...
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My name's....*sobs* FUCK THIS SHIT..*sobs* WAHHHHHHH!
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A-ah..d-don't cry...please don't...
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Ah, hell, you'll do. *takes out a bottle and uncaps it*
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WHAT?
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You don't want to? *Stares hard* Or do I have to have a heart problem?
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*Turns around* I-I d-don't even... *Mmmmph*
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*Holds down the chloroform pad on Hanako's mouth*

Back to the sleazy shower...

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Give me a break, you're undressing in front of me.

She furrows her brow in thought.

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I guess this would be somewhat more erotic for you than me.
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Why?
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...Ah.

She gives a small, light-hearted chuckle, which seems to settle her nerves a little.

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If this is too much for you, Hisao. I can come back later.
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No, no, this is fine. I'm just a bit... well...
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You're really beautiful, you know.

My earnest comment draws a vivid red blush from Lilly.

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Hisao...

I give a small grin. She's cute when she's taken off guard.

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In any case, may I come in?
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Ah, sure.

I lean forward and take her soft hands in mine, helping her over the side of the bath.
She feels out the side of the bathtub then slowly lowers herself in, my breath catching when she sits and leans her back onto my front, her legs inside mine. I'd expected her to sit at the other end.

Letting out a long breath to calm myself, I rest my arms on the sides of the bath as I struggle to control my urges.
Far from missing the sight of her... assets, the feeling of her body against mine is surprisingly relaxing. If Lilly's so sensitive to touch, it must be all the more so for her.

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You run your baths quite hot, don't you?
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A bit. Do you want me to run some cold water to cool it down a bit?

She gives a small shake of her head.

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No, this is fine.
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Okay.

The conversation comes to an abrupt end, silence taking over.

Meanwhile, in the kitchen...

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Mmmmmph.
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Okay. Jesus. Okay..don't struggle for fuck's sake.
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MMMMMPPPHH! *shakes head furiously*
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FOR FUCK SAKE YOU'RE EXPOSING YOUR GODDAMN SCARS! I DON'T WANT TO SEE THAT!
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*Stops struggling for a moment* Mmmm.
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...Gawd, just how much of you is fried up, Bacon? I..uh...*takes a peek down Hanako's pajamas*
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*Starts crying* Mmmmmmm-mmmmmnnn. *sobs*
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...I...Oh jesus, fuck this. I'm sorry. *Dabs the cloth in chloroform again* Go take another nap. I ain't touching you.
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Mmmmmmmm- *falls asleep*
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What was I thinking?!! *Runs out of the house crying* Aieeeeeeeeeeeee~!

Meanwhile, in the bathroom...

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Maybe this was a bit too..
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Don't worry, it's okay.

The situation only becomes even more awkward. As if to distract herself, Lilly runs her free hand over her legs while holding one over her breasts for modesty.
I sit idly watching the wall ahead of me and the rising steam, every now and then stealing a glimpse of her body.
The white of her skin glistens as she keeps sliding her hand over her legs, their length and tone all the more obvious.

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You know, compared to Akira, you look a lot more foreign.
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I took after my mother's side, genetically. Akira took after my father's more.
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I guess that makes sense. How on Earth did a native Scot and Japanese businessman meet, anyway?
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My mother was a journalist. She met my father while he was at a conference in Inverness.
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Ah, I see. Taking after your Scottish side would also explain your height, I suppose.

I look back down at her as she nods, and sigh at the ridiculousness of the situation.

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This is really too much, isn't it?
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In-fucking-deed.
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Man, I can hear the steam hissing. But yeah, in some ways, yes. I guess things turned out okay, in the end.
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Everything's settled down, Hanako took our relationship well, and we'll be going back to school tomorrow.
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Indeed. It's a shame to be going back so soon, but we'll still have our memories of this place.
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Memories, huh? I suppose so. We'll have to see how everything once we get back, but for now... I'm just glad you like me.
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I'm been winding myself up for weeks about that, so I'm thankful for things turning out like this.

She nods, leaning into me as we share the warmth of our bodies.
I'm not sure whether she'll be okay with it or not, but my temptation begins to get the better of my self-restraint.

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Hey, Lilly?
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Yes?
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How was it? Last night, that is.

She pauses in thought before looking down slightly. A delicate smile finds its way onto her lips as she blushes, her body becoming more relaxed. It's more than enough to answer the question.

Even as I give a small nod in response, thoughts of last night run through my mind. Considering the situation, I don't really think anyone'd blame me.

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Hisao, your heart's beating...

Her voice is cut off as I delicately place a hand on her thigh. While I'd resisted before, the memory of our first time is enough to make me give in.
She lets her body lean into mine without a word of protest, an invitation that I'd be hard put to ignore. I place a small kiss on her neck to accept, before slowly moving my hand over her smooth legs.

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Hisao, please...

Even as she says it, her mouth curls upward into a smile, her tone caught between embarrassment and awkward giggling.
Eventually she takes one of my hands in hers, guiding it to her right breast, I greatly appreciate the tentative guidance she's willing to give me.
All signs of her tension in her body give way. I continue to take in the feeling of her soft skin, redoubled as my other hand slips between her legs.
I wonder if the feeling of my hands on her is exaggerated by her lack of sight, since her other senses are so finely tuned.
She does seem to be enjoying it to a surprising extent, after all. It gives me a somewhat odd feeling, but a pleasurable one.
It only takes a few minutes before her body starts to squirm ever so slightly, her efforts to stifle her moaning becoming visible as she purses her lips. Her light-hearted whispered protestations become noticeably more quiet.
This makes me realize that all her squirming against my body's made me increasingly excited as well.

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Lilly...

I withdraw my hands to give her addled senses time to respond. Nodding, she shakily stands and offers her hands for me to lead her out of the cramped bathtub.

She maneuvers herself out of the bath as I do, our hands holding each other's.
Eventually, I sit beside the bathtub, the two of us fussing around a little until we get comfortable.

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With a small gasp, desperately constrained to avoid being audible outside, she lowers herself onto me once again.
The way she moves makes it obvious that she must still be on the verge of her climax.
She slowly starts to move her hips up and down, her tongue finding mine as she holds my face upwards. I realize just how much pleasuring her has excited me.

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Despite her clouded yes being shut, her tightening grip on my shoulders show that she's nearing the end of her endurance.
As our breathing becomes more and more ragged, I rapidly feel my limit approaching as well.
A series of harsh breaths is the only warning before her final gasp of ecstasy, her entire body tensing and her fingernails digging into my shoulders.
My loins hits hers, both of us frozen against each other in climax.

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In a precious few seconds, it's all over, Lilly slumping forward onto me as I try to regain myself.

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That was ... good...

She takes a gulp of air before replying, steadying herself as she nods.

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Mm....

She bows her head down to give me a small kiss, my hand reaching up to hold strands of her disheveled hair as we once again sit in blissful silence.
 

spekkio

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I bet Dave Gaider is reading this LP...

:smug:

Or maybe he completed this game 7 times already...

:oops:
 

Cowboy Moment

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In all seriousness, this is the reason why VNs are predominantly shit. Their authors can often write quite proficiently on a variety of subjects, but love and sex are never among them - and yet they do it all the time.

Point in case, this LP was quite readable until the whole romance plot kicked in.
 

Archaeon

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OH MY GOD THAT IS SO CONTRIVED ! :| Remember how awkward I commented on Hisao being before... Well, these 2 sex scenes were the fucking royal opposite! Why? 2 OBVIOUS things:
1. No virgin knows absolutely anything about "invitations" deducted from subtle body position changes and slight movements...
2. NO virgin knows SHIT about when his partner will climax, only from slight speed changes in rhythm!

And even if someone managed to read and learn about this stuff beforehand his 1st experience... There's 99% chance that caught up in the actual act, they won't remember or put into practice any theory... :P
I mean, anyone agree? :|
 

Darth Roxor

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I simply can't see where all the hate for Hisao suddenly comes from. I mean it wasn't an issue before.

It might have something to do with the sudden and totally baseless transition from 'uhm, well, err, nice weather, I guess?' to 'LET'S FUCK MULTIPLE TIMES OVER AND OVER AGAIN'
 

Damned Registrations

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Doesn't seem like that odd of a transition to me. They were both interested in each other but afraid of being rejected. With that out of the way > fuck like rabbits. Nothing to be timid about if you know the other person feels the same way.

Though I'll admit Hisao was poorly written and his interest in Lily not very apparent until she left on her trip.
 

lightbane

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At least in the magical world of hentais and VNs, things like "AIDS" or "pregnancy" are unknown (unless the plot demands the latter).
 

Luzur

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huh. didnt expect full blown sex scenes like this, i was expecting something soft and cuddly.

oh well. FAP FAP
 

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