chaedwards
Liturgist
Going against the flow, I actually prefer the concept art you showed earlier a lot more. This just seems gloomy and a bit over the top in comparison. Maybe it's just that I really love building schematics, but their clinical lines just add a dryer, more measured tone than this, which seems very... fantasy in a cliched fashion. As far as I understand your vision, the actual world is more interesting than that, and may benefit from a consistently different graphical style.
Just my tuppence.
Just my tuppence.