NWN OC story:
Act I : Plague in Neverwinter.
<plague runs rampant, killing billions>
Neverwinter: "We have the cure!
<Neverwinter is attacked by assailants unknown>
Neverwinter: "No, wait, we don't have the cure!"
Neverwinter: "damn"
Neverwinter: "Hey you! N00B! Find the cure!"
<player finds the cure ingredients, AND hints of a conspiracy... ooooohhhh... plague may not have been random aftter all... very mysterious>
Neverwinter: "yay! We made the cure!"
Traitor: "Ha! I steal your cure! You suck!"
<Traitor exits stage left>
Neverwinter: "We gonna kill y'all! Hey you! Not-So-N00b! Bring us that traitor. And bring us his friend, too, while you're at it! We'll kill him, too!"
Neverwinter: "Raargh!"
Act I, part 2
<player apprehends traitor>
Neverwinter to Traitor: "Burn, foo!"
Neverwinter to Traitor's Friend (aka The Dupe): "Hang, foo!"
Aribeth: *sniff!* (... He was just trying to help...) *sniff*
Act II: Where Oh Where Has my Little Cult Gone?
<player seeks for more reliable information on Traitor's Cult, watches Aribeth spiral into madness from watching her lover (Traitor's Friend introduced in Act I) swinging from a tree>
Player: "Found 'em, Boss! There they are!"
Neverwinter: "Get 'em!"
Act II, part 2
Player: "I got 'em... "
Neverwinter: "Cool!"
Player: "... BUT WAIT! There's more..."
<Aribeth turns traitor, marshals an army on behalf of Traitor's Cult to attack Neverwinter, The City That Hanged Her Friend>
Neverwinter: "So that's it, eh? That's not too bad..."
Player: "BUT WAIT! There's more..."
<Traitor's Cult seeks Ultimate Power in the form of Ancient Artifacts of Powere: aka The Words. They've got one already, need the other three to win.... in theory>
Act III: Word Up.
Neverwinter: "Find us the artifacts! Not because we know what to do wit' 'em, but 'cause the bad army want's 'em"
<player finds the three remaining artifacts>
Player: "Finally got 'em all, Boss!"
Neverwinter: "Cool! Doesn't matter though. Neverwinter's DOOMED! anyway. Aribeth, leading the Traitor's Cult's Army (aka Luskan's Army) is attacking! Woe is us..."
Player: "But WAIT! There's more...."
<player discovers that the Ultimate Power the Traitor's Cult wanted (aka The Creator Race... time travelling lizardfolk who've been napping for about 10,000 years) will destroy the world as they know it. Traitor turns out to be no more than a frothing madman, a tool of the Lizards in thei quest to return to their former position of world dominance>
Neverwinter: "Bummer, dude. Let's head back anyway. We might be able to figure somethin' out with those Artifacts you got us..."
Player: "Ok!"
Act IV: Of Invaders and Stewed Mages
Neverwinter: "Army's a-knockin' on the doors. You! Hero! Make 'em stop bothering me. Givin' me a headache, they are."
Player: "Sure thing, Boss!"
<player defeats Siege golems et. al, and earns Neverwinter a reprieve from the fighting. Aribeth may get herself killed, or may deliver herself up to Neverwinter for justice (vaporish wench...can't make up her mind)>
Neverwinter: "That's better."
Player: "I'm baaaad!"
Neverwinter: "But wait! There's more..."
<Time travelling lizardfolk are on the verge of waking up and destroying the world>
Player: "Bad news, boss"
Neverwinter: "Yup. Need you to sneak into their bedroom and off 'em all. Sorry. No other way to save the world."
Player: "OK!"
<player uses Ye Olde Ancient Artifacts to enter the lizardfolk's sanctuary, kills 'em all>
Neverwinter: "Yay! We win!"
Player: "Now where's my money?"
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A little sarcastic, maybe, but the elements were all there for a pretty good story. It's just the execution I found lacking.
What was the thread about, again?