Golel, a Dungeon Crawler RPG.

[PompiPompi]

Are we really assuming every medieval population looks like Hollwyood medieval inn/bar?

 

[Darkwind]

Looks decent?

Too much empty space in the dialog box. Also, popping the dialog directly over the in-game 3D asset is not ideal.

Make the dialog box WAY skinner (more rectangular) and put it UNDER the 3D asset so you can see the guy you are actually talking with. Will have to scale the 2D portrait down obviously but it is less jarring.

My "free" gamedev/UI critique, hope it helps!

 

[PompiPompi]

 

[The_Sloth_Sleeps]

Yes, seems original and non derivative.

 

[PompiPompi]

Yes, seems original and non derivative.

It's a little bit like the Connan intro, but the text is a bit vague. Not too crazy idea. I guess... the "anti hero" is not done very often.

 

[PompiPompi]

This is the ending of the Demo, so if you don't like SPOILERS, don't watch.

Tell me what you think:

Golel Demo end scene

 

[lvl 2 Blue Slime]

VR

Single-character

Hack and slash

 

[PompiPompi]

VR

Single-character

Hack and slash

VR is optional.

 

[Darkwind]

This is the ending of the Demo, so if you don't like SPOILERS, don't watch.

Tell me what you think:

Golel Demo end scene

Seems like a descent ending narrative crawl for what you are attempting. Not sure that final boss is "Le Epic" enough though would be my only critical feedback.

 

[PompiPompi]

This is the ending of the Demo, so if you don't like SPOILERS, don't watch.

Tell me what you think:

Golel Demo end scene

Seems like a descent ending narrative crawl for what you are attempting. Not sure that final boss is "Le Epic" enough though would be my only critical feedback.

It's not the ending of the game, it's just the ending of the Demo. And the "first episode" cutscenes.
Kind of like in the diablo you move to a new area.