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Nevill

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Uridimmu is very proud and dismissive of humans in general, if you have noticed. The magicians know what they are doing just fine, or else they wouldn't have sought the power for themselves. But the Hound is like "yeah you can conjure flames and make them do your bidding, and you have X-Ray vision, and you can devour people whole, but can any of you do a spin like this?"
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"I knew it! Puny humans!"

Can you blame him?
 
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Baltika9

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The magicians know what they are doing just fine, or else they wouldn't have sought the power for themselves. But the Hound is like "yeah you can conjure flames and make them do your bidding, and you have X-Ray vision, and you can devour people whole, but can any of you do a spin like this?"
Adorable dog aside, I think he's being completely serious here:

The ancients named me Uridimmu, I who was born of our Great Mother. The magicians call upon mere pieces of mine and bestow upon them the name of Marchosias, deluding themselves into believing that they have truly tapped into my insight and power. But I am and always will be the Hound, the companion to the nightmares of Man, the whisperer of violence in your hearts, the mightiest of the eleven primordial demons. And you are…

Of all existing creatures, he would know if someone isn't using his powers to their fullest potential. It is possible, though I hesitate to say likely, that none of these magicians fully understand what it is they're dealing with. But if we do, and if we Uridimmu tacitly on our side, well, things will get interesting for those two-bit warlocks if they try anything funny.

Uridimmu is very proud and dismissive of humans in general, if you have noticed.
I have. I'm the one who called him out on it, after all.
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ChumBucket

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Meh, after thinking on it, I am switching my vote to A.A. even if it doesn't make a difference. Fire puppy has already humped our leg, might as well get something out of it. :mixedemotions:
 

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Just a random thoughts in the hopes of prolonging the DISCUSS: What if we already have a piece of him as part of us? I mean what if the hound we encountered in the prologue was one of his manifestations, and the injury with our leg is because he left his mark on us? And this is an opportunity to make use of it? Maybe that is why he knows we will inevitably call upon him? :M

Perhaps. But "we might be infected by a dangerous and unknown power" isn't sufficient reason to say "let's go all in and see if it helps". We'd be the guy in the movie who dips his leg in alien goo, starts limping a bit & strange creatures seem to smell something funny.... and then says "yeah OK might as well just throw myself whole into the goo and see what happens." Wait, no, nobody does that, not even in a Hollywood movie.

This reasoning involves assuming that we're already infected by doggy, and then assuming that the cost-benefit ratio of accepting this no-details offer is clearly better than the ratio we have now. That's a lot of assumptions based on no real evidence.

We have the basis for a hunch that the uncanny feelings we've had might point to the Doggy Within. That's totally fine hunch to have as we go. "Hey doggy demon yeah take whatever you want and give me more of your power for some unspecified danger you said will come later" is a gigantic leap from that.
 

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===Tally===

==1st choice==
A (accept the spear) - 6

B (refuse the spear) - 14

C (ask the nice doggy permission to pet him :shittydog: ) - 2

==2nd choice==
A (You head back to the desert.) - 4

B (You head to the large city.) - 1

C (You head to the mansion on the moors.) - 14

Kipeci - AC
hello friend - AC
Lambchop19 - AC>BC
Absinthe - Ax
Orbit - AC
ChumBucket - AA

Egosphere - BA
ERYFKRAD - BC
Kz3r0 - BC
Azira - BC>BB
CappenVarra - BB
baud - BC
Tigranes - Bx
Nevill - BC
Kalarion - BC
Grimgravy - BA
oscar - BC
asxetos - Bx
Zerafall - BC
Life of the Party - BC

Baltika9 - CC
Nevill - CC
 

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It's... Thursday.
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Soon we shall come to regret leaving the coziness of Uridimmu's lair for the horror that are Jane Austen novels.

...do you think we can hijack the dream plot and salvage it as a joint novel with Wells?

“Why do I have to be embarrassed by you?” she mutters, before going down the ladder
I just want to see Sophie's reaction once she realizes Wrinkly follows her even in her dreams and books. :lol:
 

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I chose Sophie because I find it adorable how she doth protest too much, and because I wanted a glimpse in the mind of a pious Protestant (?) girl.
Oh, but oft times the most repressed ones turn out to be the wildest!

As for which team is best... let me tell you a story of three tailors who decided to open a shop on the same street. One tailor put up the big sign that read "Best tailor in town". The other, seeing this, put up an even bigger sign that read "Best tailor in the whole country". The third one considered boasting he was the best in the world, but in the end settled for a small plaque that nonetheless drew all the customers to his shop. The plaque said "Best tailor on this street".

For those who would follow Uridimmu for the fluffiness of his tail rather than bribes. :shittydog:
 
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Manor on the Moors (I)

The strong wind causes the grass to ripple. The weather is cold, refreshingly so. You find yourself standing right in front of the mansion, already on its grounds. The building itself is three storeys high, looming over you with a foreboding presence. Ivy vines cover the trellises, reaching up the gray stone walls.

There doesn’t seem to be anyone around in the grounds. Moving closer to the mansion, you look through the window. There, to your surprise, you see Sophie in an elaborate, expensive-looking white dress. Her hair is tied up neatly and she is all dolled up, looking prettier than you have ever seen her. There appears to be a ball of some sort in the hall. There are people dancing, more food than you have ever seen, and servants are bustling to and fro, attending to the distinguished guests. You can even hear the faint strains of music coming in through the window.

Cheeks flushed red, Sophie is happily conversing with a crowd of tall, handsome gentlemen that look like they stepped right out of a romance novel. On the other hand, you also notice a group of girls staring jealously at Sophie, biting their handkerchiefs like rats gnawing away at wood. You cannot make out what any of them are saying from here, the distance and general clamor of the ball drowning out any distinguishable words.

It is a puzzling sight, for certain. Was this supposed to be the trial? It seemed... rather easy, compared to what you had encountered.

A vapid dream, but it would improve marginally if the suitors proceeded to slaughter each other for her attention. That hall would look particularly resplendent when coated with red.

For some reason, you can hear Uridimmu in your head. You ignore the voice; you probably just imagined it anyway. For now, you need to figure out what to do now that you are here, in Sophie’s dream.


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A. You bang on the window to get Sophie's attention.

B. You launch yourself through the window, smashing your way in.

C. You try to quietly search for an entrance on the ground floor.

D. You climb up the wall and attempt to enter the mansion through the upper floors.

E. You decide to sit outside and wait until she is done.
 
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A vapid dream, but it would improve marginally if the suitors proceeded to slaughter each other for her attention. That hall woul
I love this dog. treave, did the sentence get cut off?

Well, goyim, congratulations, you've brought the demon you so feared along with us into her world.

Did you forget that it was bonded to our character even before we entered the dream ritual?

Eh, might as well make an entrance:

B. You launch yourself through the window, smashing your way in.
 

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Yes. All the yes. I needed that.

What can I say, I just love dream manors you appear in with nary a clue of how you got there and what you should be doing.

Well, goyim, congratulations, you've brought the demon you so feared along with us into her world.
We know that Uridimmu's fragments allow magicians to "tap into his insight and power". It could be something like this, a voice in their heads giving them suggestions or pieces of long-lost knowledge. We don't know what kind of "Angel of God" gave Rasputin his intel, after all.

We'll be bringing Uridimmu wherever we go so long as his fragment is with us.
Besides, his commentary is pretty on point.

There, to your surprise, you see Sophie in an elaborate, expensive-looking white dress.
A bride? Who's the groom, Andrew? A prince?
Wait, are we here to disrupt the wedding?

C. You try to quietly search for an entrance on the ground floor.

If we are crashing the show, no one should suspect we were there until it's time to say the vows! Let's sneak around, see what's what! Maybe find enough laxatives for the entire host of suitors. Let us show Uridimmu that blood red is not the only color the hall can be painted in!
 

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Voting D. Sophie is a fan of steamy romance novels, so I think we might get the best results by acting like a character from one.

A vapid dream, but it would improve marginally if the suitors proceeded to slaughter each other for her attention. That hall woul
I love this dog. treave, did the sentence get cut off?
We made a huge mistake in not petting Uridimmu. He's a good dog. I hope we'll be able to get a Marchiosias puppy and do normal dog things with it, like playing fetch and fighting over jerky.

:shittydog:
 

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Voting D. Sophie is a fan of steamy romance novels, so I think we might get the best results by acting like a character from one.
This is good logic.
Edit: I take it back, Sophie is right in front of us in the new draft.
We made a huge mistake in not petting Uridimmu. He's a good dog. I hope we'll be able to get a Marchiosias puppy and do normal dog things with it, like playing fetch and fighting over jerky.
This is not.

Frankly, the fact that our new best friend's valuable and humorous advice is getting dismissed by our character off hand like this just makes me sadder that we didn't take the spear.
 
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ChumBucket

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D. On a side note since this story (like many of treave's) has definite hero's journey vibes to it, this dog is representative of the darkness in our self. If we continue to ignore it and not try to harness/tame it, I am going to go out on a limb and say things will not end well for us and those around us.
 
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treave

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Actually posted an unrevised draft, further fixed now.
 

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