Speaking of purple prose:
Started decent enough in their description and then suddenly WOAH curving line carved in oak and radiant lantern of a starless night. WHAT. THE. FUCK. Dude, fuck off.
Why did these two random NPCs needed to have their smiles described in such detail and why the fuck should I care?
Random, not very interesting (even after finding out what they actually do) but with pretentious descriptions NPCs. Why?
Their smiles are completely irrelevant to their story, and to their characterization so why should I care about this high-school level of writing?
Backer NPCs. What did you think they were?
There was also a Codexer NPC in Valley of Dead Heroes. Talked about "Mask of Prosper" IIRC.
Honestly I find the criticisms of the writing here all over the place. Some people claim they hate the "encyclopedic" writing, some people hate that they start throwing numenera setting specific terms at you right from the start without explanation. It's hard to please all of you.
On my part I will say that all the background lore made me find the setting memorable and interesting, something PoE and Tyranny failed to do. I never followed the whole developmental cycle or read the Numenera p&p books, but the game makes me want to find out more, just as playing PST made me want to find out more about Planescape.
I don't know, it depends on how you read I guess. I agree that the screenshot above is just purple prose, but I read/skim very quickly and don't really spend a lot of time on passages like that.