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Let's Read I want to be a zebra! Let's read Freesia (NSFW)

Discussion in 'Codex Playground' started by Cowboy Moment, Jan 24, 2012.

  1. lightbane Arcane

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    As a law-abiding citizen, I command you to update, so bump!
     
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  2. Cowboy Moment Arcane

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    Here begins Volume 7.

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    Behold, Chapter 39, which features women trying to make themselves relevant.

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    And Chapter 40, in which a woman asks another woman to masturbate. In public.

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    Meanwhile, in Chapter 41, the enforcement draws near, and tension rises accordingly.

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    Hopefully the lady can hang around, so the story can feature lesbian strap-on rape.
     
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  3. Random Arcane Patron

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    She actually seems like a cool chick. She's got more balls than most of the men around, at least. Almost reminds me of Revy.

    Hope she doesn't end up dying for that douchebag.
     
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  4. lightbane Arcane

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    Mizu would love this woman... If he wasn't married and wasn't busy trying to prove his manhood he's not a zebra.

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    It's me, or is this little, naked bear creature a running gag in Jiro's mangas?
     
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  5. Cowboy Moment Arcane

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    Chapter 42, where a lot of posturing, scouting, and chasing takes place.

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    Chapter 43, where the nice lady faces certain death yet again.

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    And Chapter 44, where the rookies decide they don't need an emotionless, efficient killing machine on their side in a combat situation. This will surely end well for everyone.

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    I am finding myself in a bit of a predicament here bros. This marks 6 chapters on this page already. If I post 3 more, that's gonna be a fuckload of images. So, I either do that, or you get us to the next page. Either way is fine with me.
     
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  6. Random Arcane Patron

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    Bump because DU still needs to change the post per page ratio for the Playground.
     
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  7. XenomorphII Prophet

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  8. LundB Mistakes were made.

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    I'm not sure I'd call Kano an efficient killing machine. An effective one, certainly, but he wastes a lot of time due to his mental instability.
     
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  9. SerratedBiz Arcane

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    Le bump.
     
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    Lol I like that bitch. I love how this type of author always try to think "what would be really like if *** happened to me" like in that drain scene, it mostly ends up creible (within the exaggeration of the genre) and it adds up to the feel.
     
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  12. LundB Mistakes were made.

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    Agreed on all counts.

    The bodyguard should've got a job at one of the enforcement agencies ages ago, she's no slouch. I do like that this story does get quite fucked up and strange, but for the most part still feels like the real world, with not too many changes. I'm not sure how to put it, it's not realistic, but it doesn't feel as cartoonish as a lot of stories of its ilk. It does make the point that even something so seemingly crazy as the enforcement act could become a pretty mundane part of life, and not really change things all that much, for better or for worse.

    Also: Holy fuck, an artist who actually draws a athletic/combatant woman with fairly realistic muscle, not stupidly weak looking or with impractical bodybuilder proportions. Now that's rare.
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  13. RK47 collides like two planets pulled by gravity Patron

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    tight. I predict rape at gunpoint.
     
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  14. Random Arcane Patron

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    Needz moar bumpz.
     
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  15. spekkio Arcane

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    Bump if you would bump Hisae-chan, gunpoint or not.
     
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  16. Random Arcane Patron

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    Bump if you're not a zebra, but a unicorn.
     
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  17. Cowboy Moment Arcane

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    Since we have a bunch of free posts, I'd like to ask you bros, what do you think is the point of the entire manga? I mean, the author is obviously not writing it for the sake of awesome action and witty JossWhedon-like banter between likable protagonists. For example, if you read the wikipedia entry for Freesia, you can learn that Kano is a "mentally unstable ex-military assassin" - the kind of character you would expect to look like Sephiroth and listen to My Chemical Romance in a wapanese story. So, why is he the way he is? Why would you make your protagonist someone like that?

    It's way easier for me to see certain things, having the entire story to draw from, but I'm curious what sense you can make of what you've seen so far.

    Also, as we come closer to the end, which won't be that long at the pace we're progressing, I'll drop my attempts at humor, and will start to analyse the whole thing more seriously. God knows there will be much wtf in the ending parts, so it's good to have at least some of it reasoned out.
     
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  18. spekkio Arcane

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    CM asks for MAJOR spoilers.

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    As with 99% of drawing males, the author wants to draw naked chicks.

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    Beacuse that's awesome.

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    Sup, 1eyedking?

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  19. Cowboy Moment Arcane

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    Well, how do you think the actual new readers are going to receive the ending then?
     
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  20. spekkio Arcane

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    No, idea - I'm one of them too.

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    (AFAIR current volume is the last I've read)
     
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  21. Cowboy Moment Arcane

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    Also, 1eyedking is one of my role-models here on the Codex. He's so cool and brave.
     
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  22. spekkio Arcane

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    I'll brofist this.

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  23. lightbane Arcane

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    Bad example: Sephirot was a retard that wanted to destroy the world for the lulz and exterminate all life because her mother said so he wanted the Ancients to return. I guess a protagonist like Kano is fun because it's refreshing, it's not a generic stupid/emo-kid number 21041. Of course, it all depends of the writer, a kid protagonist can be tolerable or even likeable if it's well written (see Gon in Hunter x Hunter).


    TL; DR: I don't care how "mature" your commentary is, I want you to post moar :rpgcodex:
     
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  24. XenomorphII Prophet

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    Bump for more!
     
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