Jaedar
Arcane
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Maybe, maybe not. I do agree it sticks out, but Wenduag is also a completely broken shell of a person. And I think in the end she's really just ruthlessly whoring herself out for increased physical safety and justifying it in a few that makes her feel in control.Like, if you know "sex positive" people, the way e.g. Wenduag talks about her fetisch is exactly like these people would talk. I'm not judging, I'm just saying it sticks out like a sore thumb when you take that kind of prose and put it into a fantasy world in a story about demons invading.
It's cringe in every definition of the word, and you can't help suspecting that some of these writers Care Very Deeply About Sex Positivity and completely lack the ability to sell those points with more subtlety than just having these characters blankly stating their sexual desires.
I am very upset there isn't an option to execute her / relieve her of duty on the spot.(like Irabeth's waivering)
(Galfrey incompetence counter: +1)
As for the writing, I think it has some pretty good highs, but also some rather low lows. Definitely more memorable than kingmaker in the end.