Who stood in the flames of the four world wars
This is a very minor detail, but it bothers me a bit. "The Second World War" already sounds like something out of H.G. Wells, and Einstein pointed out that after the third go we'd be back in the stone age. Having four world wars, none of which are apocalyptic, kind of cheapens them. I think they'd have done better to stick with three, four is just gratuitous unless they're in some Mad Max world.
Overall this guy's bio isn't as bad as the others. The previous ones were unreadable, they were so boring and inane. With this one they at least focused on interesting stuff, even if it was clumsily done, and they even got creative by including a speech by the guy. Creative exposition! If they were really smart, they'd have looked up one of Goebbel's* speeches and used it as inspiration. Would have given the character more flare.
*Goebbel or some other famous orator, depending on what vibe they're going for. The point is that the people writing for this game could use some inspiration.