Vault Dweller
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I agree that it's the best approach but nothing really came to mind when I had to name the area and I couldn't sit on it for days.
Since nobody lives there or nearby, there was no relationship and thus no need to describe it. It was simply left alone and forgotten until the demand for power cells drove the first scavs there. These scavs knew that it was Mission Control a 100 years ago or so but it was long before they were born so they'd have no reason to refer to it by its old name. To them it's nothing but some old wreckage with ancient corpses that can fetch good money.The + [Desolate adjective] + [Cavernous noun] combination (or just the noun) is going to be awfully generic, and we might as well stick with wasteland over anything of that sort, none of it is ever going to sound any good.
Haba seems to be on the right track - what kind of name will the locals come up with to describe their own lived relationship to it? It's not going to be anything ostentatious or abstract, it's going to be part of the industrial, patchwork, scavenger lingo. I don't know if you've been planning on the locals sporting any particular jargon.
To them it's nothing but some old wreckage with ancient corpses that can fetch good money.
Why not just call it what it is? These people know they are in a ship right?
Since nobody lives there or nearby, there was no relationship and thus no need to describe it. It was simply left alone and forgotten until the demand for power cells drove the first scavs there. These scavs knew that it was Mission Control a 100 years ago or so but it was long before they were born so they'd have no reason to refer to it by its old name. To them it's nothing but some old wreckage with ancient corpses that can fetch good money.
How about The Wound instead of The Wasteland?
The Chasm
The Maw
The Breach
Sure they would - that's it's name and they knew that. Why would they come up with a new name when one already exists?These scavs knew that it was Mission Control a 100 years ago or so but it was long before they were born so they'd have no reason to refer to it by its old name.
The Wound is a fantastic name that would fit Mieville's The Scar perfectly. It makes me think of a wound in the fabric of reality but not of gutted decks inside a spaceship.
Now Deadfall sounds like an A+ winner to me.