The Jester
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It's not a story about heroes, it's about sword autism.I have begun reading Full Metal Daemon Muramasa.
It starts with a serious sword duel, then devolves into grotesque sadism, and then a blurb about "this is not a story about heroes", and then...
So far it has the same problem as Witch of the Holy Night, but worse: there is far too much prose, which is redundant in a VISUAL NOVEL where we can see and hear what is going on. I don't need poetry. 90% of plot happens in dialogue, not in prose. Trim the fat!
Writer is a sword otaku as you can see in both of his works.