Admiral jimbob said:http://z8.invisionfree.com/Community_Chaos/index.php?showtopic=28&st=0&#entry462232
Vipera said:Okay, here's a short erotic story I wrote, it's only 946 words so don't worry about it taking much time to read.
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It was the first time Dave had ever been this close to a dolphin, and so far he was enjoying it immensely. He had always been enamored with them, and on occasion seen them from the beach; but never before had he actually touched one!
As Dave followed him out, he took one last look at Cassidy. “I’ll be back.†he mouthed. Cassidy responded with a wink and a smile.
Her muscular vaginal tract went to work on his member, working up and down the shaft. He began moving in and out of her, lovingly caressing her rostrum as human and dolphin made love. Dave tried to hold his orgasm off as long as possible, but when Cassidy’s tail brushed his scrotum he let go, emptying his balls into her with a groan of ecstasy, and delighting in the feeling of her own orgasm as his semen spurted onto her vaginal walls. Cassidy went limp, rendered temporarily motionless by the waves of pleasure still wracking her body.
Vipera said:Critique please.
From furry to fishy(i know dolphins are mammals but wtf cares)!Vipera said:Critique please.
baby arm said:
Q5) Is their any way I can invite a dolphin to be masturbated?
Actually (assuming you're for real), a short paragraph or so on dolphin sexuality would've been helpfull, (like do they do it for fun or what, mating habits etc) and maybe a little background bit on the guy. As for you being sick, well probably, but at least you're not boring... (I've read a lot of books in 40 years, yours is the first dolphin sex one I've ever come across - so kudos for originality).Vipera said:I take it you can't find any fault with my story, then?
Vipera said:A look of dawning comprehension crossed his face. "She’s in heat!” he thought, “And there aren’t any males in her tank!” Dave smiled ruefully. “Well, that’s not quite correct; after all I’m here.” He started swimming back towards the tank’s ladder, intending to report the dolphins amorous behavior to the trainer, when he felt what he now new to be a sonar pulse hit his groin. His penis became turgid almost instantly, and he gasped at the alien sensation.
OccupatedVoid said:
Well, I'm getting my license this Saturday, but there's more than enough wild dolphin pussy in Florida so fuck fence-hopping.SlavemasterT said:For the love of God, one of you admins needs to forward that story and Vipera's IP to the folks at SeaWorld - anything to give them a head-up, as the little perv certainly lives within driving distance. Think of the dolphins.
Thanks. I tried to throw in a few facts, but I'll be sure to go into detail next time.franc kaos said:Actually (assuming you're for real), a short paragraph or so on dolphin sexuality would've been helpfull, (like do they do it for fun or what, mating habits etc) and maybe a little background bit on the guy. As for you being sick, well probably, but at least you're not boring... (I've read a lot of books in 40 years, yours is the first dolphin sex one I've ever come across - so kudos for originality).
1) Any suggestions I might be able to use in any future installations?KreideBein said:Fine then, three things:
1) It was poorly written.
2) The "plot" was horrendous.
3) You're a disgustingly sick motherfucker.
Anyone up for photoshopping this?Top Hat said:Vipera's spawn with dolphins?
Vipera said:Jasede, whoever wrote that is a dumbfuck. Just because a dolphin can ejaculate 14 feet doesn't mean shit. The world record for human male ejaculation is 18 feet and the average male shoots 6 feet. Think of a supersoaker; do they cause serious injury? No, because there's not much pressure behind them, and they shoot much further than 14 feet.
Not that I'm advocating anal sex with a dolphin.
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