It's like they put in a dozen connected subplot intrigues but forgot to finish any of them or ran out of time to do so. Srsly:
- Evil dad. Evil dad suddenly appears in converter, then just as suddenly vanishes, and finally conveniently leaves you 4 audiologs to explain his evil and even then it remains really dumb. Wut.
- Zardoz. Zardoz gets himself a mutant army that he
never uses, then suddenly trololo kidnaps Caja, and by "kidnaps", I mean "dumps her in his not-exactly-secret-lair so that the playa might come in and say whatho whaddup im here to rescue you".
- Zardoz again. His sudden-ass teleportation to Thorald and Caja and the massively tardo orion jackal shapeshifting are off the charts dumb and outside game logic (must be forbidden ancient ELEX magix).
- Speaking of, wise sensei Thorald who knows everything about everything including alb tech is...
- And then there's the pointless Thorald "ritual" whose only purpose is for Caja to get kidnapped, see prior point.
- "Yuo are a berserker, Jacques, and so is Kallax!" uhhhhh okay, what about it?
- "Jacques, there's a mind control device in ur 'ead!" uhhhhh okay, what about it?
- Elexetor Tarek the guy without purpose. Yo whaddup homie why you kill muh alb army in front of palace? O ok imma just stand here and pretend nothing happened then while i tell u about evil dad.
I can see where they might have been heading with some of those subplots, but really, without any proper closure or fleshing out, the majority of them just should have been cut. Remove Zardoz, remove evil dad, remove mind control chip, remove berserker origins, almost nothing is lost. You'd just have to somehow come up with a different culprit behind shooting Jacques's glider, but you might just as well put that on the separatists and say they shot you down to stop you from carrying out the hybrid's eevul schemes.