All right, I finished Oathbreaker. My
impressions:
"The general's tale" portion is a straight up pace-killer filled with
useless, made-up trivia that I felt served no worthwhile purpose. The guy kept dropping a lot of names and describing a lot of events that I simply could not be bothered to care about. Most of that could have been cut and the story would have lost nothing.
I don't like the inklings of "Man, things were so much better in the past when we had that noble king who united the kingdom and was practically a living saint" blah blah. Though the rest of the story implies this may be a history-written-by-the-winners thing and it wasn't all sunshine and roses.
The knight training being unisex struck me as odd. This is one of those in-vogue
grimdark fantasy settings where
brutal things are happening to people all the time so it's weird to me that women would get this equal opportunity to be soldiers and receive the same harsh training as the men. Even stranger is that three women passed the finals and proving themselves superior to many of the best men. I guess this can be waved by it being
fantasy. It feels a bit like inclusion for the sake of inclusion rather than an inclusive world that's been thoroughly thought-out. I'm sure this is some nice ragebait for the misogynerds though.
On a similar note that one sailor who seemed disappointed in the lack of male whores in her shore leave town was odd. Like as if the author thought "Well if male sailors go see whores on shore leave, then a female sailor will purchase the services of a male whore." While some women
do this kind of thing it seems unlikely to me that this particular character would have to directly pay for it.
All in all, I didn't find anything that offended me, but it didn't really hold my interest either. Magic cyborgs are thankfully not-Tolkien but the whole DUTY/OBLIGATION theme wasn't enough to grab me (plus it looks like Book 2 is a tangent with a completely different set of characters; what an odd decision). I don't think
Lesifoere would hate it either, but she too would likely find it boring and be put-off by the author's obvious male-perspective. So regarding Torment, I think I can rest a bit more comfortably about it not being especially off-putting to women (unless inXile has some awful artists)but I'm still uncertain about whether or not it will be an original story worth telling.