Drog Black Tooth said:
MaskedMan said:
- Her reply to line 209, "were the spirits of elves..", should be "spirits of the elves"
Didn't hear this one, the VO matches the text perfectly. Can send you the sound clip if you want.
Heh, I clearly hear her saying "spirits of
the elves", the text hasn't got that last "
the", I could send you a sound clip.
But if you can't hear it I guess there is no reason to change it...
Some more stuff:
- Talking to Nasrudin:
- The dialogue bit after you watch the video of Nasrudin banishing Arronax (line 1508) seems to be missing the first sentence. It begins "I had regained just enough energy to seal myself...", the VO goes "
When I regained consciousness I was on the shore of Thanatos. I had regained just enough..".
- His reply to line 375: "common in the Age of
Legend.", should be
Legends. Also the text says "Had a liking for halflings", the VO says "
He had a liking.."
- His reply to line 233: "retreat into his regenerative shell, and emerge stronger
that ever", should be
than.
- His reply to line 395: Text says "No, I believe our decision.." while the VO only says "I believe our decision.."
- Weldo Rubin, his reply to line 171: "There was
a no obvious entrance", lose the
a.
- Typo in the book "The Great Work": "And since we all
no that no such mechanism exists", should be
know.There is some weird hyphen use in this book, I guess that it could be because it is 220 years old, but you might want to have a look at it nonetheless.
- When talking to the master of Morph in Tulla selecting line 35 (asking about werewolf cure) she gives you a description of it. If you then ask line 133 (ask to have some) her reply is almost identical to the one you got to line 35. You can then say line 140 "I need to gather more coin. I will be back", which implies that the morph master gave you a price and not just a description of how rare it is. You don't really get to know how much it will cost unless you should have enough money for it.
Here is a save so you can see it in action.
- Talking to Aldo Terrin, master of earth in Tulla: His reply to line 32 (& 64 & 51 & 41, any lines that asks him to describe the earth college) "The college of earth deals with the living force
than emanates from the land beneath our feet", should be
that.
- Generic response from Tulla students if you have a
good alignment: "Greetings stranger.
You're countenance shines brightly from your pure heart.", should be
"Your.."
- Pelojians amulet is described as to give +40 magic resistance but it also gives you +10 AC / +12 AC (depends on which other items you are wearing). It is also not magickal, which seems a little odd since it was made by the same man that founded Tulla, but maybe that's just because it is so strong that it remains unaffected by technology.
- Talking to Simeon Tor:
- His reply to line 221: text says "I can only assume he has his reasons..", VO says "assume
that he.."
- His reply to line 32: "Hearing
tells of him in my youth...", should be "
tales".
- His response to line 271 isn't voiced, maybe the same problem as Bates/Virgil?
- The schematic for Potion of Paralysis is described to combine mushrooms and Varham's Aqua Vita, what it actually combines is wine and strong poison. It's probably done for re-balancing, the use of a component you have to make yourself is in style with the rest of the more advanced potions, so maybe you should just change the text of the schematic.
- Schematic for Automatons: "All hail the
the Automaton...", lose a "the".
- Magnus, his reply to line 469 (about Caladon): "
Its quite a feat of architecture", should be "
it's".
- When you give Eric Obsidian the Durin Stone: "
Its Beautiful", should be "
it's".
When telling him about the Iron Clan he replies: "
Its more than I ever hoped or dreamed", should be "
it's". (sorry I don't have the line numbers)
- Talking to Virgil in the basement of the Sobbing Onion, his reply to line 48: "but that small part
of wanted very badly to stay", "should be small part
of me".
- Talking to Teach about how to get a boat:
- His reply to line 46: "Its not somethin' I even like to think"
- His reply to line 65: "its just as well that I didn't tell it"
- His reply to line 83: "its said most spirits return to their graves"
SHOULD BE IT'S!
- Stringy
Petes Cove should be Stringy
Pete's Cove? (I'm not that good at those rules, but if Petes Cove is right Stringy Pete's Treassure should be changed. Or not.)
- Talking to Stringy Pete, his reply to line 270: "That be amazin'
laddie!" , should be "
lassie", like in all the rest of his dialogue.
- The quest to repair the altar in Vooriden for Stringy Pete does not register as completed if you tell him that you have already done it when he mentions it to you.
- Talking to Franklin Payne:
- His reply to line 143: "Legend told that
one the of the Barbarian tribes", should be one
of the.
- Line 13: "no way for
gentlemen to act.", it kinda works the way it is, but I think that it was intended like the other ones (NPC & PC as gentlemen), and that it should be changed to "a gentleman" to make it clearer.
- This lady from the Pits has a male soundbank (I guess it could be because they are in prisson.. :D )
- I don't think that the Dark Elves would need a human noble to help them defend the Elven tombs...
- This chest in the Bangellian deeps seems a little excessive, it's like they just placed a whole magick shops inventory in a chest.
Since I'm about to enter the Void I decided to have a look at the logbook:
- Shrouded Hills rumor: "
Its rumored that strange people have been seen in Shrouded Hills, asking about the Panarii prophecies", should be
it's.
- Tarant rumor:"
Its been rumored that Cederic Appleby would do anything to destroy Mr. Bates", should be "
it's"!
- Log entry from Black Root: "Gladys, the old lady
in that wants me to locate her missing ring..", lose the "
in"?
- Black Root rumor: "Rumor has it that Herkemer Oggdoddler is
a highly trained in the skills of war", lose the "
a".
- Log entry from Wheel Clan: "Randver told me that Loghaire disappeared into the caverns of the Dredge, an old system of dwarven mines that now houses an assortment of
fould creatures.", should be
foul.
- Log entry from the Boil: "I have found out that Treat was descended from the Black Legion, created by Zalakar during the Age of
Legend.", should be
Legends (this one just annoys me...).
- Rumor from Stillwater: "Rumor has it that Brigitte is the woman to talk to concerning the Cult of
Gestianna here in Stillwater", should be
Geshtianna.
- Log entry from Quintarra, about Falcon's Ache: "Under no circumstances
am I shed blood while removing these men", should probably be "
to shed blood".
- Log entry from Bedokaan Village: "I met a creature named Kan Kerai. He is the chieftan of the
Melokaan, a race of sentient reptiles who
live the Dark fens", should be
Bedokaan and "live
in the Dark Fens" .
- Rumor from Caladon: There is a serial
murder stalking the streets of Caladon", should be
murderer. This entry also dubs him the Whytechurch
Murderer (murderer written with capital M), while a later entry (the one about searching the homes of the victims calls him the Whytechurch
murderer. It's a small detail, but maybe you should change that to Whytechurch Murederer, so that the logbook is consistent.
- Log entry from Caladon, you have convinced Hadrian that you are an archaeologist too, and he has told you how to get into Nasrudins tomb: "I am to enter the old catacombs through
the a crack in the sewer walls", lose the "
the"?
- Log entry from Caladon: "Gunther Wiliiam told me that Alexander is a direct
descendent of Saint Mannox", should be "
descendant".
- Quest entry from the Boil: "
Darian Maug has contracted you to kill Pollock", should be
Damian, shouldn't it?
- Quest entry from Isle of Despair: "Find Warren Lianna Pel Dar of Cumbria and tell her that Maximillian still lives on the Isle of Despair", wasn't Warren her dad? I'm not sure where they were going with this....
