thesecret1
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How about:How do you picture this? "Hi, I'm from The Daily News, here to ask you a few questions about your plans for the town?"
"You want me to kill Jonas? For you? Why? What would you do differently?"
[Braxton expands on what he dislikes about the town and what he would change, you can press him for more info, etc.]
To be honest, something like this sort of exchange is what I'd actually expect. This dude is asking you to kill the town mayor, he should be trying to sell you the idea, sell you on why Jonas needs to be removed and why Braxton is the best thing for the town. He needs something from you, not the other way around, he should be giving you the propaganda to get you to buy into his shit. Vice versa for Jonas. Also, people around the town ought to say something about the state of affairs. In Teron, you had everyone talking about Teron and the world in general, be it the innkeeper or the graveyard keeper. You had the preacher in the square offer his take on the situation, you had information provided to you about the various organization (all you had to do was hover over their names on your character sheet to get a quick rundown on who they are), and you could infer a lot about the town through environmental storytelling. You saw the crime, sure, but you also saw things like the crumbling walls inhabited by squatters, showing extreme poverty, you saw the better district where the affluent lived in their slowly crumbling mansions, you saw the decay of society itself by having assassins and thieves operate in the open as regular guilds, and of course you also saw the many criminals crucified by the imperial guard. All of these things gave you information about Teron, about the world, and about the factions.
In the Pit, on the other hand, I don't really see much aside from lawlessness. There's some attempts at portraying poverty with all the garbage food being offered, but it's a far cry from the absolute misery you can see in Teron. Everyone, and I really mean everyone, comes off as a gangster of some sort, and there's little in the way of portraying the factions or the people therein.