Brayko
Self-Ejected
This is so not a fraud!
Also, as much as I hate to say it, link to FACEBOOK. Fastest way to grow in popularity these days. Make a twitter account. Link it to your page.
Brother None said:It is pretty easy to do. 200+ projects and countin'
This is so not a fraud!
That being said, you should really do something about the story and writing. The premise and the whole story is just stupid. It makes no sense and seems like something a 12-year-old would come up with. Not even a talented 12-year-old, but Gaider junior. It's not even bland and generic. It's unnecessarily convoluted, too long for what it should be and completely and painfully retarded.
Digging a tunnel for 16 years... lugging a sleeping dragon around... I don't even...
Norolim said:Not going that fast, unfortunatelly. Have you been covered on any games related sites? If you have a press release and want to send it to Polish sites, I'd be heapy to help you with translation (professional translator). I posted about your campaign on the forum of the biggest Polish games site, but considering how the thing works there, it will probably sink soon enough. I also dropped the news to their editorial staff, but it would probably be better if they heard from you directly.
Haba said:Yeah. I hate to be that guy, but...
If this is the best you can come up with, I'd cut it. Or at least tell less of it to the player. The 7 minute intro is just too much.
Exposition is always dangerous, especially if what you are exposing is not too interesting in the first place.
"Best soldier of each race"
Thanks Abraxas, I'll let them know about the project.Abraxas said:You can also try El Pixel Ilustre. They have covered the other RPG kickstarters and being spanish they will probably be insterested in this.
Sputnik said:I also fear that the combat may be too simplistic but I believe there will be more information about that soon?
Jarpie said:Autoloot Games, are you going for this style with equipment:
Gameplay-wise, the first sword would be a rare weapon
Why is the former stronger, than the latter? Because it has more detailed grip and hilt?Gameplay-wise, the first sword would be a rare weapon
I assume this is because all the shitty swords such as those in the first picture have been destroyed when wielded against proper weapons such as those in the second picture?