1. Really progressive and long-winded way to spell male and female :D. I imagine some people might fight lack of penis + breasts combination very offensive and discriminatory.
2. The blue "!" markers don't fit the environment style, look too much like a sprite. I imagine a low-poly, mostly translucent exclamation mark, that fits more with the room geometry would look better. Very minor thing really, as functionally it's perfect.
3. Text seems a little bit blurry at 1440p resolution fullscreen. At it's usual window size looks perfect.
4. Is the PC walking animation a placeholder? It looks very stiff (few frames). On the other hand, if that's the style everything will move, it's fine.
5. Yay for having something on screen that could be source code instead of bunch of html :D
6. Bed interaction doesn't change after you took the weapons. Immersion broken, unplayable
7. I really like your dev commentary on how the full game will differ. Good stuff!
8. Characters are a bit of uncanny valley for me, but consistent style. Good.
9. Glamour thing is mostly for lore or so that you can get away with assets coming from different sources / being reused?
10. Sex in games doesn't really do it for me, but I liked bits of vampire lore you could get during it. Otherwise I think it's ok, especially if the game can be completed without it.
TL;DR: good stuff, really want combat/exploration demo.