Tyranicon
A Memory of Eternity
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Step 0.1: Make the player character a fresh modern day fledgling, and make the inner voice a X hundred year old vampire.one of the dilemmas we encountered was how to make someone like Phyre relatable
Step 1: Don't give a X hundred year old vampire a name that even some zoomer mumble rapper would cringe at.
This is MUCH easier for relatability, permits detailed character creation, etc.
Make it so a bunch of thinbloods tried to diablerieze an aged vampire, and something happened, and now you are fighting for control of your body with that old vampire. Works well in Cyberpunk, or Shadow of Mordor. Making it so we control the aged, out of touch, powerful and defined character, with a weaksauce thin inner voice is.... le dumb.
This really is what they should've done. They're out of their depth trying to write an elder.
A new fledgling is much easier to write, and more relatable to their supposed target audience, and easier to build progression around.
The inner voice being an older vampire, perhaps even slightly amused they got diablerized by some whelp, will provide much more interesting commentary, and a better enemy within plotline that I assume they are going to attempt here as well.