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Overall, the writing's alright, neither terrible nor superlative. Nothing to write home about. Next.
The writing might only be uninspiring rather than terrible(except in a few places) but the narrative design of the main plot and it's interaction with the world building is so dogshit that I get intense desires to hurt people when I think about it. Cut out Eothas and the gods, the soul shit and what you have is ok. Also cut out all the Calishitian "deep"/"tragic" characters; the desperate and tired "subversion" and what you have might will be a fun fantasy romp. Realize that your writing staff isn't particularly strong and set your design goals accordingly.
If this actually had been on the level of the DLCs then noone would really have complained imo. (Not that the DLC's writing is something revelatory mind you)